....it's a decent start...
I see potential, the idea is good.
But you should really hold off submiting "Demos" or unfinished stuff... people just don't want to have to play/watch something unfinished.
If you build on this, i can see something beautiful coming out of it
That, my friend, is a prime example of programming and visual artistry.
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